Responses from audience feedback on `Gloves` Magazine Review

Audience feedback on Magazine Review

From receiving all of my questionnaire forms back here are some of the good responses and the ideas for improvement:

Good responses:
• Breakout box is imaginative, easy and fun to read
• Creative headline through different fonts
• Liked the magazine name and `thumbs up rating` brings the quirkiness to the magazine.
• Nice colour scheme makes the review look arty and draws attention to read.

Ideas for improvement:
• Make the gloves image behind the film title more noticeable as a focal point combined with the title.
• You could enhance the photo behind the text so that it is more visible to the audience it is a pair of gloves.
• Some parts of the text can waffle on, could cut out unnecessary parts; such as the critics views.
• The main text would look less boring to read if it was broken out with a breakout quote from the article. To draw attention to the text and make you want to read it.

Taking aboard these ideas for improvements I will now go away and make amendments to certain parts of the magazine review in order to maximise my target audiences preferences.